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Blind
25-04-2011, 03:31 PM
Hi, this is a piece i'm currently working on:

There's sorcery between your twisted lips
Your syrup voice will soothe me
With bedroom eyed betrayal
I see the glamour in the art
Can you feel the hammer in my heart?
Your solemn with your eager
Those pretty little fingers could smash the life out of me

Still a working progress

bastet
25-04-2011, 03:56 PM
hi there and welcome :)
an intriguing write..it would be nice to see more as it comes along..
really like the way you use the language :)

Blind
25-04-2011, 07:33 PM
Thanks for the support.
This is another working progress, i'm having trouble finding the time to complete my work, but here's another extract from a poem i'm yet to complete...

The dancing lights depart into the distance
There will be a positive resistance
To come to light
Eternal night will drown me in a clarity of instance
A cold symmetry
Nobility is not a birth right

The skies explode in rain
Impaled by the spears of giants
Lips will tremble
Behind me are chants
Burning the fruit of God
Prevailed to forgive
I am a failure at siege with my own initiative