Mr. Bergstrom
06-04-2008, 06:15 PM
I'm not usually a massive fan or erotic poems but this contains all the subtlety and evocative imagery ever needed. The last three lines are very powerful because of their honest and demanding nature.
Let's be discreet
Tell me
That your eyes do not search for me
In a crowd
And I shall say to you
That my heart does not miss a beat
When I see you
And that nature's fertile flow
Does not bathe
The most delicate
And intimate essence of my femininity
Tell me
That I have not felt
The pressure of your body against mine
And that I was not shocked
Or excited
By the power of your masculinity
Tell me that you cannot cure the ache
Which lingers between my thighs
And my body will deny that I desire you
- Amanda Townsend
Let's be discreet
Tell me
That your eyes do not search for me
In a crowd
And I shall say to you
That my heart does not miss a beat
When I see you
And that nature's fertile flow
Does not bathe
The most delicate
And intimate essence of my femininity
Tell me
That I have not felt
The pressure of your body against mine
And that I was not shocked
Or excited
By the power of your masculinity
Tell me that you cannot cure the ache
Which lingers between my thighs
And my body will deny that I desire you
- Amanda Townsend