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VersesofTheStreet
30-11-2010, 01:51 AM
A new friend of mine by the name of Naomi Nandi Newton, wrote this for me.

The Smooth Spot.

I seek to be a smooth spot
in the bumpy road of life
a place of shaded contentment
in the glare of worldly strife

A brook, a stream, a river
where cool, clear waters flow
to water the garden of passion
to irrigate the soul

A candle, a light, a beacon
to light the darkest way
to banish fear, to banish doubt
to shelter them that stray

a hug, a touch, a warm embrace
to still a quivering heart
to bring a warm and nurturing peace
from which you would not part

I wish to bind, I wish to heal
all the wounds of strife
So I seek to be that smooth spot
in the bumpy road of life

Naomi Nandi Newton

VersesofTheStreet
11-12-2010, 07:24 PM
*bump*

Mango
11-12-2010, 07:57 PM
I like it. It's not too long. Keeps the message in view throughout.It is well thought out from beginning to end.