counter-poetry

[madkill]

okay basically, you write a few lines, somewhere around 4 please, nothing huge. :)
That has a small
AABB
ABBA
ABAB
scheme to it etc, WHATEVER!..all you have to do is counter it in your next post.

Example:

The light was shinning
birds were singing
the sky a baby blue
you know I love you.

----[Counter Time]----

The darkness filled the land
explosions in the distance
the Blood-red sky
I love the smell of war

^
Stuff like that. :drunk:
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:scooter: So now I'll start.

people cry on the inside,
people cry on the out,
but who are the real ones,
that are always in doubt?

PS: Please put the 4 lines in White, so then it stands out from any non-poetry comments you wanna put in your post. :)

[madkill]

people cry on the inside,
people cry on the out,
but who are the real ones,
that are always in doubt?
------
Friends laugh out loud
Friends laugh within
Your real friends are most favoured
And help you when in doubt!

[someone play with me on this...pwease... :cry2: ]

[stuartryder]

Apologies to Louis Armstrong.

You hear coral vaguely blue,
Green pistols neither,
You hear it wilt,
Regardless of you nor me,
Nor do you gibber away from me:
How no wonderless void.

[madkill]

Apologies to Louis Armstrong.

You hear coral vaguely blue,
Green pistols neither,
You hear it wilt,
Regardless of you nor me,
Nor do you gibber away from me:
How no wonderless void.

thanks but erm... :mad:

[VersesofTheStreet]

people cry on the inside,
people cry on the out,
but who are the real ones,
that are always in doubt?
------
Friends laugh out loud
Friends laugh within
Your real friends are most favoured
And help you when in doubt!

------
Enemies hurt you outside
Enemies hurt y within
they'll take the ones you love
and kill you in the end

[smorzando]

jasper and roxy
are loyal and kind
a smarter dog
you wouldn't ever find

[VersesofTheStreet]

jasper and roxy
are loyal and kind
a smarter dog
you wouldn't ever find

But my cat Toledo
is a mean one you see
she tore into Roxy
and made her owner go pee

[BenJohnson]

jasper and roxy
are loyal and kind
a smarter dog
you wouldn't ever find

But my cat Toledo
is a mean one you see
she tore into Roxy
and made her owner go pee

Watch out Toledo
here's the vampire bat
one little bite
and you're a vampire cat

[Barley]

jasper and roxy
are loyal and kind
a smarter dog
you wouldn't ever find

But my cat Toledo
is a mean one you see
she tore into Roxy
and made her owner go pee

Watch out Toledo
here's the vampire bat
one little bite
and you're a vampire cat

But then dawn came,
with warming rays,
the pets now tame,
will sleep for days

[BenJohnson]

but days will end
and the night's not so nice
I hear Toledo is out
making vampire mice.

[Shanalorm]

but days will end
and the night's not so nice
I hear Toledo is out
making vampire mice.

Or evening will start
with romantic candles
I say Toledo is in
ending wherewolve rats.